Let's see... how should I start off. Okay, I've seen a lot of art work of this character and I have to say you really did her justice. Kyori looks totally adorable here, I'm sure KyouKaraa just loved this. And it always great to have a commission be happy.
The vision on the piece is outstanding. Just looking at the piece gives me a sense of calm serenity. The blurred out tree in the back really makes Kyori stick out to the viewer. The originality was given a lower star, because it is common to see character standing on water like this. Now to technique. Omg your technique just makes my kokoro spazz. It is so gorgeous. The coloring is just so pretty. And your style is very unique to say the least.